Racism,Is not a great way to get good reviews,We have many diffrent users on here from skin colour to race.This flash needs alot of work.

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Entertainment:0/10(I was disgusted at the lack of efoort put into this,You should focus on some less racist and make it more entertaining.)

Effort:1/10(It is great you have installed a flash program,But I was amased when I saw your art(I like it) But in your flash it is poorly drawn and spammish)

Truth:0/10(This is an insult to people to a diffrent skin colour,I hate the fact people do not accept diffrent things in life,You should make a better flash.)

Audio:3/10(This is how you got one star,I like rap,But I hated when it was used,Try and improve your timing.)

Altogether,I did not enjoy this flash it was racist and poorly drawn,I understand flash is hard but making a good movie/Game takes time and you should spend more time in your flash.Improve!

I enjoyed the difficulty,Which many enjoy.I got very repetitive when you died and you hear the annoying sound.There is alot to work on.

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Fun:6/10(Well it s basicly dodging obsticals with the keyboard,You should add enemys and make it like mario.)

Difficulty:8/10(It was/seemed impossible,I enjoy a challenge,But I THINK it was a bit too difficult.)

Flash:4/10(It was greatly animated FOR a beginner,Your next flashed should be better animated.)

Altogether,This was a game that need alot of improvement,You could do all theese things above to improve on your flash,I understand flash is hard but theese are only suggestions.Can't wait to see more from you!

This was flawless and very funny,I liked the sense of humor in thsi,Which is gory and brutal.This was greatly animated!I can't beleive people can do this with flash!You amased me with you greatly detailed animations.

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Humor:10/10(This was great in humor!I liked it how nobody noticed him and he gets hurt.Nothing to be improved on here.

Flash:10/10(Greatly animated!It gave me a very great atmosphere!)

Flash Quality:10/10(Nothing bad in the quality,You also made sme characters easier to see when you should have your attention on them,Mny artists forget this and I get distracted.)

Audio:10/10(It suited the theme,Which is kinda like an adventure and very epic.Nothing to be improved on here.)

Altogether,This was a VERY enjoyable peice of work,I like your flash skills,And you always send your veiwers of feeling great.Can't wait to see the sequel!

Seeing that you are 9 years old I am impressed,This does need alot of improvement though.I liked the beat and the guitarish sound at 2:01.

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Audio:4/10(This sounded good,But lacked variety,You should add more sounds.)

Audio quality:10/10(GREAT!It is so clear and easy to hear!Nothing to improve on here!)

Style:2/10(I seemed to like,But I also didn't,This is not really my kind of music,But I liked the way you made it.)

You should add more variety in the sounds,I understand making music is hard,And I enjoyed what you created,Try some diffrent music types.Hope to see more!!

You are a great artist.This song was awsome in my opinion,Yet so creepy,I think you do not need much improvemnt in this song.It gave me a creepy atomosphere,And had great quality.
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Audio:10/10(This fits all my tastes in music,The only thing you cold of improved on was adding some more scary sounds,I understand audio is hard but this is only an improvement.)

Audio Quality:10/10(This had amazing quality,Nothing you had to work on here.)

Creepy:9/10(This was creepy,But I thought that there could be more creepy sounds.)

Heavy medal:10/10(This was great heavy metal!I enjoy rock and the heavy metal added to the creepy atmosphere._

Altogether,This was an amazing peice of work,I enjoyed listening to it over and over again,It even made me enthusiastic to type this review,I hope to see more of this great audio!

I liked the rap.I enjoy Hip-Hop.But there is some things you should improve on.If you have a audio editing program you could of made it alot more better and rappish.

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Audio Quality:4/10(I heard your breath in this peice of audio and you went to continue and the sound ruined the other parts of the rap.)

Audio:7/10(I like rap and since you made it your self it made me glad to think we have great rap in the world.)

Rap:7/10(I love rap but the sound of your breath in the mic ruined some parts of the rap.)

Style:8/10(I like rap that is about life and this shows great style,But you need to try to not breath into the mic.)

Altogether,This was enjoyable but gets really annoying,Try and not breath into the mic next time,If you do this it would be alot more enjoyable and the reviews would be great!

"Review Request Club"