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If I ever find my mind I will lose it again and so on.
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17 Reviews | 11 w/ Responses
Seeing that you are 9 years old I am impressed,This does need alot of improvement though.I liked the beat and the guitarish sound at 2:01.
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Audio:4/10(This sounded good,But lacked variety,You should add more sounds.)
Audio quality:10/10(GREAT!It is so clear and easy to hear!Nothing to improve on here!)
Style:2/10(I seemed to like,But I also didn't,This is not really my kind of music,But I liked the way you made it.)
You should add more variety in the sounds,I understand making music is hard,And I enjoyed what you created,Try some diffrent music types.Hope to see more!!
Author's Response:
It's not my fault! Ask Jesse Venbrux!
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You are a great artist.This song was awsome in my opinion,Yet so creepy,I think you do not need much improvemnt in this song.It gave me a creepy atomosphere,And had great quality.
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Audio:10/10(This fits all my tastes in music,The only thing you cold of improved on was adding some more scary sounds,I understand audio is hard but this is only an improvement.)
Audio Quality:10/10(This had amazing quality,Nothing you had to work on here.)
Creepy:9/10(This was creepy,But I thought that there could be more creepy sounds.)
Heavy medal:10/10(This was great heavy metal!I enjoy rock and the heavy metal added to the creepy atmosphere._
Altogether,This was an amazing peice of work,I enjoyed listening to it over and over again,It even made me enthusiastic to type this review,I hope to see more of this great audio!
Author's Response:
thanks for the great review :) More creepiness, agreed :)
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I liked the rap.I enjoy Hip-Hop.But there is some things you should improve on.If you have a audio editing program you could of made it alot more better and rappish.
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Audio Quality:4/10(I heard your breath in this peice of audio and you went to continue and the sound ruined the other parts of the rap.)
Audio:7/10(I like rap and since you made it your self it made me glad to think we have great rap in the world.)
Rap:7/10(I love rap but the sound of your breath in the mic ruined some parts of the rap.)
Style:8/10(I like rap that is about life and this shows great style,But you need to try to not breath into the mic.)
Altogether,This was enjoyable but gets really annoying,Try and not breath into the mic next time,If you do this it would be alot more enjoyable and the reviews would be great!
"Review Request Club"
Author's Response:
wow.. thank you so much.. i usually have to ignore abuse in reviews but you really helped me, i enjoy rap im good at making rhymes as i go along but my friends told me to try to write some stuff so i did but its hard, I'll use a beat next time cause this was a test but thank you.. i will sort out the quality if possible, but definitely stop the breathing.
thank u!
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This is a great song and I Liked the clappish sound!You could of put in more spooky sounds,Like echoing.
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Audio:19/10(While this is great,I think you could of used some spooky effects.)
Audio Quality:1010(It had nothing wrong with the quality,It made me think I was there.)
Spooky:6/10(I think it was more dancish and wasn't that spooky.)
Epicness:10/10(It sound like one of thoose epic battles in animations with epic music,Very great indeed!)
Altogether,I enjoyed this dancish and epic song I think you should experiment with some spooky sounds,Then it would be better,Can't wait to see more of your epic and great audio!
Author's Response:
Thanks. =3
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The electric guitar sound,and also what seems to be bells.Maybe You could of added a bass somewhere in it.
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Audio Quality:10/10(It was easy to hear and clear.)
Audio:8/10(You could of added some low sounds,But with/without it was great.)
Dance like:6/10(Made me wanna get up and dance,But part of me felt like it was not that great to dance to.)
Altoether,I enjoyed the sound and the clapping.I hope to see more of this great audio from you!!!
Author's Response:
Of my friend, I have the longer version of this song on my page now, go check it out! Let me know if you like the new mix better. Oh, and by the way the "clapping" is a militia snare with reverb. ROFL, but I like how you put the two together. Now that I think about it, it does kind of sound like someone clapping really hard.
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This song fits all my tastes in music.You could work on making your voice a bit louder,just to make the song sound more rockish.Did you make the guitar using computer or your real guitar?
Author's Response:
real guitar
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Great work,This suits the nightmare theme and it makes me even think i'm in a haunted house,I especialy loved the what sounds like a piano,Sadly I think you could of added a bit more sounds to make it more scarier,this is just a suggestion.Keep up your great audio!!!
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Like I said,in hollywise.Are you in some kind of band?yes?do you have an album?if yes i would buy it for sure.When I see your audio I know it's gonna be great,keep up your perfect audio!!
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This fits all of my tastes for music,I like the drums and the vocals,i like the guitar solo at the end,i hope to see more of your great audio,keep it up!!
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The beat and rythem is too fast and the sounds were limited,maybe you could try working on your next techno song a bit more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment. I will keep it in mind and try to improve it in my next song.
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