Score: 1

"Racism :/"

submission: alfred meets a black man

date: November 25, 2009

Racism,Is not a great way to get good reviews,We have many diffrent users on here from skin colour to race.This flash needs alot of work.

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Entertainment:0/10(I was disgusted at the lack of efoort put into this,You should focus on some less racist and make it more entertaining.)

Effort:1/10(It is great you have installed a flash program,But I was amased when I saw your art(I like it) But in your flash it is poorly drawn and spammish)

Truth:0/10(This is an insult to people to a diffrent skin colour,I hate the fact people do not accept diffrent things in life,You should make a better flash.)

Audio:3/10(This is how you got one star,I like rap,But I hated when it was used,Try and improve your timing.)

Altogether,I did not enjoy this flash it was racist and poorly drawn,I understand flash is hard but making a good movie/Game takes time and you should spend more time in your flash.Improve!

Score: 7

"Not so great...."

submission: Rubber Ball: Be a Hero

date: November 22, 2009

I enjoyed the difficulty,Which many enjoy.I got very repetitive when you died and you hear the annoying sound.There is alot to work on.

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Fun:6/10(Well it s basicly dodging obsticals with the keyboard,You should add enemys and make it like mario.)

Difficulty:8/10(It was/seemed impossible,I enjoy a challenge,But I THINK it was a bit too difficult.)

Flash:4/10(It was greatly animated FOR a beginner,Your next flashed should be better animated.)

Altogether,This was a game that need alot of improvement,You could do all theese things above to improve on your flash,I understand flash is hard but theese are only suggestions.Can't wait to see more from you!

Score: 10

"Great JAZZA!"

submission: LARRY episode 1

date: November 18, 2009

This was flawless and very funny,I liked the sense of humor in thsi,Which is gory and brutal.This was greatly animated!I can't beleive people can do this with flash!You amased me with you greatly detailed animations.

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Humor:10/10(This was great in humor!I liked it how nobody noticed him and he gets hurt.Nothing to be improved on here.

Flash:10/10(Greatly animated!It gave me a very great atmosphere!)

Flash Quality:10/10(Nothing bad in the quality,You also made sme characters easier to see when you should have your attention on them,Mny artists forget this and I get distracted.)

Audio:10/10(It suited the theme,Which is kinda like an adventure and very epic.Nothing to be improved on here.)

Altogether,This was a VERY enjoyable peice of work,I like your flash skills,And you always send your veiwers of feeling great.Can't wait to see the sequel!

Score: 10

"Astonishing game!"

submission: Sonic Legacy

date: November 14, 2009

There isn't much you have to improve in this,The only think you have to improve on is,Having the characters talk like in certain parts.I loved the sprites also!

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Sprites:10/10(The sprites were flawless and great,Nothing you need to improve on here.)

Audio:10/10(It was perfect,It had the sounds of a normal sonic sprite,Nothing for improvement here.)

Audio Quality:8/10(At some parts it sounded a bit off,It was clear and perfect in most parts though.)

Fun:10/10(I spent a good number of minuits playing this,And sprites are not really my thing.This is really fun!)

Altogether,I loved this game!There wasn't much flaws and I can't wait to see more of this great flash!It is great what flash does theese days.

Score: 5

"Great,For a first submission."

submission: Art of Revenge

date: November 13, 2009

I enjoyed it but it was a bit laggyish,You seem to have put in a reasonable effort into this,But you need to work on this a bit more,I hope to see this come out of under judgement.
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Audio:7/10(It suits a fighting theeme,And it was enjoyable but it sounded a bit dull.)

Audio quality:9/10(It seemed to have fizzed up a bit,Near the end,You could improve on making it a bit clearer.)

Flash:6/10(You get some sympathy since this is your first,You should improve.)

Flash quality:2/10(I saw it but it was very fizzy and it lagged a bit.)

Altogether,I liked it,But there was alot of room for improvement,I hope I see some more improved flash from you.

P.S:Give credit to the artist you got this song from,Add their band name,And link it in this at the file animation.

Score: 10

"Almost perfect!!"

submission: the PICO DAY anthem

date: November 6, 2009

You are one of my favourite artists on NG.This flash doesn't need much improvement,The only thing you could improve on is add a sky to some certain scenes where the sky is white.

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Animation:9/10(Almost perfect but I think you should of added a background in certain scenes.)

Audio:10/10(I loved it!Not only does it mention some of my favourite movie characters on Ng I think you don't need to improve on this.)

Audio quality:10/10(No bad audio quality in here it was perfect and I think it doesn't need improvement.)

Flash quality:10/10(Nothing fizzy this is perfect!!This doesn't need improvement at all!)

Altogether,I loved watching this and I hope to see more of your great flash sumbmissions.Your movies are almost perfect!

Score: 10

"Great detail!"

submission: Killing Spree VI

date: November 2, 2009

I enjoy this seris,It is just like castle.Too bad him and his friend died,People like you have imspired me.Maybe you could of added some more things like from the matrix.

Ratings

Flash quality:10/10(This is animated greatly just like castle.You put in alot of effort.)

Audio:10/10(Very dramatic which suits the storyline,Maybe some audio portal music?)

Audio quality:10/10(Very clear and easy to hear,I heard it so well i could see myself standing there watching the fighting.)

Storyline:8/10(A very great storyline,But if it just started from making the best in life I Just like the fighting and the great detail.)

Audio:9/10(Very dramatic,Which suits the seris.)

Gore:10/10(I loved all the gore splashing all over the animation,I just seem to enjoy gore.)

Altogether,You don't need much improvement and I hope to see more of this amazing seris!!Your flash skills are great.

Score: 10

"Broken"

submission: The Awesum Quiz

date: October 31, 2009

It is a great quiz,But at question 20 it is broken :(.

Score: 10

"Great!!"

submission: Rodney's at the door

date: October 28, 2009

I loved the song,But I didn't know what the guy was trying to do,Great animation by the way.

Ratings

Audio:10/10(It was great,Reminds me of the music i listen to ^_^And it didn't have poor quality.)

Flash:5/10(There was no background,But I loved spiky dude.)

Altogether,I think you should add voice and a background,and a bit more color.I hope this survives and keep up this great work!

Score: 0

"Spam"

submission: Cyberspace Adventure

date: October 28, 2009

Everybody hates spam,Why did you put a blank blue background with very few sound effects.Make an actual flash next time.